1295 C.E.
Emperor Kublai Khan died just yesterday. His death was caused by too much drinking and his obesity also caused his death. He died in his second palace Dadu, China.
We all know that Emperor Kublai Khan had an alcohol consumption problem and he was terribly overweight. Who knew this would be the cause of his death? The great Khan who had brought down the last of the Song Dynasty now dead because of his caretakers not doing their job, which is to take care of Emperor Khan.
"I'm very sad that he's dead because Emperor Khan was raised in China so he had respect for it. But, now that he's gone will the next Mongol emperor have a bit of respect for the Chinese people or will we be lower than we already are?" said Zhien Li. This seems to be the concern for most Chinese people. They shouldn't be worried about what is going to happen to them because they aren't treated any differently compared with anyone else.
It is said that Khan's grandson, Temur Oljeitu will be his place. Although he is the grandson of Kublai Kahn, can Temur possibly do any better than his grandfather or will Kublai Khan be the only successful Emperor of the Yuan Dynasty? Hopefully Temur Oljeitu's banquets will be thoroughly monitored, and the caretakers have learned their from their mistake.
This is a good article, but I am not sure if it is an editorial? Perhaps this would work better as an obituary? Your editorial needs to be about a very controversial topic that could have different opinions.
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